The exciting for jungle trekking
THE EXCITING FOR JUNGLE TREKKING
I had an exciting experience for my first time to
jungle trekking at Korat province on last
vacation. I can remember clearly because it was the best
activity that I do in this year!
I never had to trekking before. At the
first time when I know I was exciting.
With its mountain landscape and lush jungles.
The jungle that I had to trek is the rainforest and very high.
I can remember, how many time that
I spent for trekking. I spent around 1 hr and a half. While hiking to the top
of the mountain, I got to see the beautiful flower, birds but a lot of insects,
worms, poison ivy and mosquitoes.
On the top of the mountain, it was
awesome. I can see the nice of view so far from here. My team took the photos
around 30 minutes and 5 minutes for relaxation. The hike back out of the
mountain went much quicker.
I am very glad to have had this
experience, but there are many other places I want to go in Thailand before
returning to Korat

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The score is 9
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